Tricked again

He gently whispered in her ear: “Today will be different. I promise. I know that I have been rough on you especially the last weeks. Often just thwarted your plans. I’m sorry. But today, I’ll let you be in peace. Just do what you had planned. I won’t say anything. Enjoy that day. Have fun.”

That sounded like music to her ears. She ignored the little voice of doubt: “How can you trust him?He has lied to you so often already” She got herself dressed up nice, chose matching earrings and a necklace.. “Finally I can go out again and enjoy myself.” The neighbors offered a ride in the back of a pick-up truck.Quite common transportation in Centralamerica.

She felt so free finally walking over the busy and colorful marketplace again. Here and there she ran into friends. There was hugs and laughter and little chats.. she so needed that after being locked up in the house for so long. And she was surprised that he treated her so friendly today.20180203_104742

But then it happened. On the way home, as she was sitting in the open bed of the pick- up truck again. Out of a sudden he started to beat on her merciless. He wouldn’t stop for almost half an hour. People that were standing by the roadside just looked puzzled. Why would she sit there and just let it happen?

When they reached the yard where she lives, she took a quick jump from the car.. ran towards the house as fast as she could .. to get out of her wet clothes and put some dry ones on … because that half an hour of RAIN had her drenched to the boneπŸ˜…

If you think only sunshine brings happiness, then you haven’t danced in the rain. (Author unkown)20180202_093144



26 thoughts on “Tricked again

    1. 😍was waiting for your response on this one because I knew you would noticeπŸ˜‰ was going to write about this rain for two days but every time I started I felt blocked..had a poem started.. erased everything again.. then this afternoon I got this evil idea… πŸ˜‚I was thinking on linking to your blog or so because I got most of the inspiration for this one from you .. haha and the Rain β˜”

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    2. Really from the start you kept the face .. even didn’t have a small doubt … That’s why the climax is awesome… I can understand how my reader feel after reading my post … Again you you pretty devil… Keep rocking … Expecting more from you partner πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    3. Glad to hear it worked and you got to feel how I always feel reading your stories πŸ˜…I’ve always been fascinated by stories like this. After I worked my brain tired yesterday.. trying to compose a poem I just for fun started to imagine how I could write a story like this about the rain. Of course shortly after I read the vibrating phone story πŸ˜‚

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    4. haahaa …. Even with my grammatical error and funny language skills i inspired some people to write …. πŸ˜‰ when this story is made as a short film you would be the leading cast πŸ˜‚ But still i dont get likes or comments for the phone’s story … (Angry Face)


    5. Keep in my i always looking for your comment …. and am a baby blogger right ? dont hurt with harsh … if it is good then give positive comments if its bad then … give a positive comment for that too πŸ˜‰

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    6. Same here, and you know I’m baby blogger myself 😍and let’s never forget each other even if one of us should be growing faster or so .. let’s not forget we started out together. Hope I never hurt with harsh yet! Because I certainly don’t want to get treated like that myself. If I ever should sound harsh please let me know personally by email.

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    7. Hello i’m template robot i just came here to say thank you instead of my lord commander, Shri Stormborn of the House Jack of all trade, First of His Name, the Unfollowed, King of the Fun and the First baby bloger, Khal of the Great blog sea, Breaker of likes, and Father of Dragons Mr. Shri

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    8. Wait …. do you know difficult to paint the white walkers even with a robot … silly girl … and me and messandei are planning to release a baby instead of episode are you ok with it
      – Posted by the template robot
      definitely not by shri

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    9. Hahaha thank you πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚will be an interesting day. He’s trying to tell me his lies again and I don’t know how it will go. Maybe I will believe him. Maybe TODAY he’s finally keeping his word. Or maybe he will beat me up again.. let’s see πŸ˜‰

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